Jadi si Frieska ini baru upload puisi lagi. Cukup dalam si maknanya dan bikin gw jadi mikir sebentar, merenung sebentar dan rasanya jadi pingin tulis ulang (beneran ditulis ulang gitu) puisi dia dengan editan di sini dan di sana. Jadi inilah hasil edit-edit itu:
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Maybe we took it too slow
And kept it too low
But now you know
We couldn’t meet our vow
Still I remember, though
When the spring was blown
And everything you sowed
Let’s prune all that ever grow
I want to let them go
And trade all the sorrow
Because I believe so
We are made to glow
Alone or in a row
What do you think?